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Thorns of the Fallen by ~DarkFeruil:iconDarkFeruil:

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This pain... this bitter pain I feel...
Throbbing in my sinful heart... despair... loneliness... isolation...
I... remember my sins... those sins that led me to what I am... I am hated... I am deceitful...
Locked into my reality... I lost... I fallen...
Once innocent... as a child... child's happiness lined my features...
I flew with the birds... I sang with them... I was wild... free... child's ecstasy...
Now... all that has fallen... my shambles of my ecstasy... torn... ravaged...
The great cataclysm that destroyed me... I felt lost... I was weak...
Golden butterflies... swarmed around my little form... dying... in glittering embers...
Butterflies... only the fallen shall see... at the last of their dying purity...
Who am I? Why was I ever even born?
Branches of blood... dripping from my hands... never ceasing its flow...
Stigma... of the guilty... the fallen...
Shamed... dark... bitter... pain of thorns...
Chained in tendrils of thorns... I walk alone... this brooding... path of torment...
Longing for once again... the sweet light...
©2004-2010 ~DarkFeruil
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Author's Comments

Nothing to do with roses...I assure you....

Fallen....chained....how can one ever be free to see the light again?

*sighs somberly* I'm soooo dark....ne?

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~Tsug-Tsug Jul 11, 2004, 4:54:10 PM
I don't think you're daaaaark!

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He said that to be an artist you must "study, Observe and train, train, train---" And maybe one day you'll be able to do a perfect circumference!
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~SQTifa Jul 11, 2004, 4:57:52 PM
Lovely, its great to read something by you again, and this is magnificently worded. I think many of us can relate to this, great job :clap:
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=Comethius Jul 11, 2004, 4:58:25 PM
I like it!

The feeling of hopelessness, the wondering about self, the longing for something that can take away the pains and discomforts we have caused on our own. I know this world all too well.

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~DarkFeruil Jul 11, 2004, 6:14:25 PM
Hahaha...maybe not all the time....^^;
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~DarkFeruil Jul 11, 2004, 6:15:41 PM
Thankies!!! :D :hug: Yeah....I think so too! ^^
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~DarkFeruil Jul 11, 2004, 6:17:14 PM
Thanks! Yep, the world itself proves for many disasterous and horrible! *sighs* How I hope to change it....
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~Tsug-Tsug Jul 11, 2004, 7:12:21 PM
Hehheh

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He said that to be an artist you must "study, Observe and train, train, train---" And maybe one day you'll be able to do a perfect circumference!
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~Kurara-Shikaze Jul 12, 2004, 12:38:27 AM
It's beautiful and clear.
So good ^_^
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~DarkFeruil Jul 12, 2004, 7:52:37 AM
Thank you!!! Glad that you enjoyed reading this!!! :D
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