So this describes you... good. I know you a little bit more ^^
I love the part of the petals.
Well I can't make an advanced critique just, keep it up!

Awww...that's okay!! ^^ Thanks!! That's one of my favorite parts too!!! ;D

Well I would like to say first...that giving it a second reading, I did find mispelled words and a few words that in my opinion should have been added. For example /through worlds...so much to see...so much >TO< feel.
I do enjoy the reminisence in the first several sentences, the reflections you put into your poems have alot of heartfelt emotions. I also like the way that it seems you're speaking to someone else as if you have shared this experience with another person.

One thing that I feel when reading this...some of the vocabs you use in here...and don't get me wrong they're very impressive on how they are used, but it seems like if I didn't know much about them I would find this as a test of my knowledge of the english language.

None the less, it has such a beautiful scenery that can be painted in many different ways...I like that ^^

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....result of a fast typing session....ah, well...thanks, dude! ^^ I believed I fixed the errors and added a few words here and there. >< Thanks again for the help! Glad that you understand how I feel about things now....>>

I did enjoy the poem and since you wanted some critique on it, I thought I would give some advice.
Yes when I read your poetry its just like hearing tell it to me or someone else in that sort of way.
Fascinating!

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Beautiful! I love this line the most "my collages of reminiscences" <3 Yeah, as for critique...I cant really think of anything, so.....*points to Comethius* what that guy said.

Thanks!! Aww....that's okay....

God that's beautiful. Plus, you used my favorite word ever! Effulgence! (okay, I'm a huge nerd. But I'm alright with that. Really I am.)

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Advice: Don't take singing lessons from obsessive basement-dwelling ex-circus freaks. It never turns out well.

Thanks!! That's okay! I'm obsessed with words too!! XD