I see it in her eyes…
The twinkling charm…
The everlasting beauty that lay hidden…in furls…
Waiting to be unfold…
By the worthy of men…the chosen…
Lithe in form, rosy lips and cheeks…
Sweetness all the while…
Her welcoming arms…enfolding like silken ribbons…enchanting…
Soft fragrance…awing trance that I lay…
Gossamer gown of angelic trait…
Her silken skin pressing earnestly against mine…
Promising…her heart…her love…
Yet…in the end…she betrayed me…she broke me…
After all that I did…she left me…
The calamity of my unraveling…















Comments
I have always loved this talent you have to paint a picture perfect detail about someone...
Something I'm still working on and may be working on for quite sometime. ^^
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And you're quite welcome you deserve more comments than...
what is handed to you...
I certainly hope the rose shall grace me with something lovely for my second entry.
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Love hurts ;_;
the human condition, but i liked it. very deep and thoughtful.
excellent work!
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